Here it is!
The first page of the prolouge!
Let me introduce the secondary Main character,
(strange that Hydroshift or Hallie is also a character that you might as well consider as the MAIN character)
Either way, this is the new route i'm taking with the story, trust me its a lot better than how i originally planned to start it! I will probably post some more character sheets later of some of the new characters in the story. Other than that be patient and look forward to more!